But his analysis and narrative flow are excellent, especially when we reach the modern era.
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The impact of the story has been fatally damaged, as has the narrative flow.
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I just wish she had left out a few and given the book more narrative flow.
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There would be no need to tamper greatly with the narrative flow.
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His books of the post-war period combined simple words and vibrant images in the manner of comics, and retained the propulsive narrative flow he had mastered as a film-maker.
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